That is great! You did an excellent job cleaning up my mess! Very informative. You are right, there were many random sentences, as I had just started creating this resume and had not put any time whatsoever into origination, formatting, grammar, etc. I hope your readers don’t think that this resume represented my “best work”, because it was just the very beginnings.

I am excited to shop this resume around as now I feel confident that it is a polished document. I hope my experiences have helped your readers understand what is needed to do a simple clean-up of a unpolished resume. I will let you know the results. Thanks again!